My Initial Ideas

Idea 1:  Bad Nightmares(Working Title)
Titles on black, heavy panting and heartbeat over top.
A boy is standing in a big hall in hospital pajamas, long shot of boy in distance.
Camera shakely moves up to the boy (cloes up), fast forward.
Confused facial expression
Reverse Shot to other side of hall, long shot with chair in corner, girl in chair, head down.
Chair moves towards boy direction(Up to camera) in short cuts.
Boy frightened covers face. (close up) dutch angle
Boys hand reaches for girl, Mid shot, hand comes across screen.
Face comes from other side screaming loud
Boy wakes up in bed.
Story would continue to have the boy being in a coma in a hospital. Wierd things sytart to happen to him that related to dreams when in his coma.

Age rating will be 15, TA would be around this age and up. middle youth.
Setting sports hall.
Hall will be empty, recognisable as school hall though, so basketball net or football in view. future setting in movie perhaps.

Sound will include winds, heartbeats and heavy panting




Idea 2: Gotta Run(Working Title)
Camera moving around a town, shakily, (PErsons perspective) Music over top
Titles over topView of legs, tracking shot with object runing
Close up of man looking behind, heavy panting.
Stop at wall, look around franticly.
Rests a bit, feeling safe.
Hooded figure jumps at man, shouting and cuts to end.