Our teacher felt that the black screen at the beginning was much too long. It lasted for 29 seconds. He said that it would be good for a longer movie but not enough technical skills are shown. It also can be a bit confusing. The ending credits on black were also too long. They lasted for around 15 seconds. We were too influenced by the film Halloween (John Caprenter - 1978) but decided there should be some extra footage here as well.
A student, age 17, also gave feedback. He felt that the beginning was a bit boring and didn't catch his eye enough to actually want to watch on. It was also a bit confusing of what was going on as all it was were Sirens, Tyre Screech and then a woman talking.
