Monday 27 April 2009

Feedback

Feedback from our first final cut was rather drastic.

Our teacher felt that the black screen at the beginning was much too long. It lasted for 29 seconds. He said that it would be good for a longer movie but not enough technical skills are shown. It also can be a bit confusing. The ending credits on black were also too long. They lasted for around 15 seconds. We were too influenced by the film Halloween (John Caprenter - 1978) but decided there should be some extra footage here as well.

A student, age 17, also gave feedback. He felt that the beginning was a bit boring and didn't catch his eye enough to actually want to watch on. It was also a bit confusing of what was going on as all it was were Sirens, Tyre Screech and then a woman talking.

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