Rough Cut

This is the rough cut of our media movie. It has no editing but cuts done to each clips. We decided to get feedback from both our class(Target Audience) and our teacher(Knows the industry well).

Our teacher gave us feedback saying that we would need to use fast paced editing. This would fit in more a younger audience is more used to faster paced cuts and also it is a good way to build tension to improve heart rate. We also would need to consider re-filming some scenes E.G the zoom in on " Loomis' " was too Amateur-ish.

When we showed our sample footage to our target audience(Selection from our class) they generally liked what we had done. They liked the way we did the scene with the girl in the chair moving across the floor. However they did notice that there was a slight zoom out during this scene which doesn't fit well. 

From showing this rough cut and getting the feedback from the viewers i have learnt some industry techniques to use in the film and also what to avoid such as Manual Zoom in. I also found that the narrative of the movie was good for our target audience but wasn't up to industry standard.