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This is a draft of our screenplay. It may be revised as we properly work it out.
This is our revised screenplay. Changed due to feedback and also new ideas thought up to improve.
Screenplay Revised
We chose to not include the heartbeat and the heavy panting as we found this annoying, and felt that using the police siren and car crash it gave a bigger shock, which is what we wanted. We decided to add in the voice over of the woman(Loomis' mother) Because it adds exposition. It also tells you that he is asleep, and in a dream, but you do not yet know he is in a coma.
This is a draft of our screenplay. It may be revised as we properly work it out.
This is our revised screenplay. Changed due to feedback and also new ideas thought up to improve.
Screenplay Revised
We chose to not include the heartbeat and the heavy panting as we found this annoying, and felt that using the police siren and car crash it gave a bigger shock, which is what we wanted. We decided to add in the voice over of the woman(Loomis' mother) Because it adds exposition. It also tells you that he is asleep, and in a dream, but you do not yet know he is in a coma.
Screenplay 3 This is our third and final screenplay. We decided to change it due to feedback we got about our product from our teacher and some of our Audience. The black at the beginning and end of the product was seen as dull and also a lack of technical skills so we filled it in with extra shots and changing where the credits went.
Pyjamas unless you're American ;)
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